Chocolate Week Belize

Chocolate Week Belize
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In 2008, a strong Tropical Storm stalled over wonderful Belize and dropped more than 35 inches of dirty water in the state over a span of a week. The wonderful village of bullet tree experienced unprecedented flooding all over the village, but especially hard hit were the major business are. In addition, virtually every major roadway was impassible due to high dirty water that looked like chocolate. And with the widespread street flooding, the farmers couldn’t go to their farm to see their major crops destroyed, and start to plant no crops.

In the year of 2008, a powerful tropical storm raged through the country (isn't it?) of Belize, dumping more than 35 inches of dirty contaminated water in just one week. The usually beautiful village of Bullet Tree was hit hard and suffered terrible flooding throughout the village. However this was nothing compared the sector where the Major Businesses are! Furthermor, every major roadway was impasible due to the troublsome chocolate colored water. Moreover, the widespread street caused a delay for farmers who urgently needed to get back to their farm to inspect the ravaged cros and start to plant new ones.

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